Ok this is my feedback
uma....ummmmmaaa.. ummaaaaaaa,..um,ummm,aaaaa, uma....ummmmmaaa.. ummaaaaaaa,..um,ummm,aaaaa, uma....ummmmmaaa.. ummaaaaaaa,..um,ummm,aaaaa, uma....ummmmmaaa.. ummaaaaaaa,..um,ummm,aaaaa, uma....ummmmmaaa.. ummaaaaaaa,..um,ummm,aaaaa, uma....ummmmmaaa...