So they both have the same nickname. Odd. And confusing.
As for what's cheesy? All the names and lore, for the most part. But then I'm coming from The Witcher series where they adapted a professional author's work. Cyberpunk lore by comparison- I'm sorry not trying to be a dick- but it sounds like someone in junior high thought this stuff up. I'm simply used to better writng from CDPR.
Same nickname?
The Lizzies <->
The Mox ... What? Not confusing, I think you confused yourself, Choomba. Forget the nickname from whom The Mox was founded on. Does that help?
Mike Pondsmith, from what I can tell, is not a professional author like Andrzej Sapkowski, so yeah I guess. The vision of a dystopian reality how Pondsmith presents it, back in the 80's/90's still holds up today somewhat (sadly and very eerily, too). Most of that isn't really portrayed, or if it is, we can't really tell because our somewhat dark reality mirrors too much of that dystopia. I'm not even going to speculate how the new lore material 2021-2077 reflects upon today without having played the game and read the full lore from Cyberpunk RED.
Names...Johnny Silverhand, Morgan Blackhand, etc... yeah those are 'cheesy' as fuck, I agree, but those were written in the late 80's/early 90's. Even some of the character illustrations in the 2020 source book are cheesy, because they're dated. So there is validity that
"someone in junior high thought this stuff up": Most of the women portrayed in that source book all dress like sex workers, while the men don't - a probable sign of a horny heterosexual teen. In contrast, one example there is Cindy from the 2018 demo, so props to CDPR for a more balanced approach.
And in terms of lore 2060 onwards we know next to nothing, only snippets, descriptions, etc. Everyone is using 2020 source material and what we know from Cyberpunk RED Jump Starter Kit at this stage. So there is a massive lore gap.
In terms of story writing, I thought V kept her cool with Dex havin' a 'flow to their convo', Jackie talked like a cyberpunk, even the Trauma Team soldier did (made me pray hard for a Trauma Team DLC) ...but that's just my 2 eddies.
The best way to gauge the level of story writing, is to ask what you thought of dialogue between V and the various NPC's:
Jackie, Dex, Stout, Placide, Netwatch Agent, etc? Also keep in mind, that what was shown may have been changed completely since then...
Back to the topic,
Formed in 2076 after the death of Elizabeth “Lizzie” Borden, a strip club owner & ex-prostitute who treated her workers fairly and defended them from violent clients, The Mox refer to themselves as “those who protect working girls and guys” from violence and abuse.
This really tells me little, it's like a fish out of water. There is little context in terms of how this relates to that world. It seems like a rarity for people to come together and care about others at all. Those willing to betray and find more value in a can of Nicola compared to human life seems the norm and the Zeitgeist of the Cyberpunk universe. How does The Mox come in context with
style over substance, survival at the level the people in 2077 have to deal with, the darker future (2077) of a dark future (2020), etc.? Guess we have to wait and play the game to find out, no?