When I started reading this comic I was actually immediately rather annoyed at the following bit:
"For what chance would some measly chelondrake have against a purebred golden dragon?"
She isn't, she's half green (Myrgtabrakke), half golden(villentretenmerth). That's why she only has a single human transformation. Shame on you CDPR.
And although I think this was mentioned before as well, I highly doubt Iorveth and his elves would leave Vergen at all. It's pretty heavily implied Iorveth is in love with Saskia and at the start of the Witcher 2, you have a short conversation about a group of elves bowing to the dragon as she flies overhead. I don't think they'd be angry with her being a dragon.
Other than that I really enjoyed the comic and I'm glad we have a little more backstory on Saskia and Vergen at least. Although I do hope Yarpen is safe as well, CDPR has come out and stated both Saskia and Iorveth are safe so for now I'm going to go with that and hope to see them both in the upcoming expansion. (I secretly hoped to see a few hints at them during this one already but you can't win them all.)