I doubt that cdpr is presenting your music, so I
highly recommend to remove this from your video:
Soundwise, I think that it doesn't sound like Cyberpunk. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice song and you obviously did a good job on producing it. But I'm clearly missing some
dystopian vibes. Your song sounds modern, which is fine, but in order to fit into the cyberpunk scene it should either sound more worn-out (80s), more aggresive (Industrial/NuMetal), or more black (in terms of D'angelo).
Maybe try this:
- voice less in the foreground - think Michael Jackson
- darker sounding instruments, especially bass drum and "snare" - no clap on the back beat!
- make the bass line sound more like Pino Palladino
- guitar is too static, should sound more like Isaiah Sharkey