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Isn't that queer...something as simple as a line of dialog. Seriously it wouldn't even require a line from the other two witchers...they could go slack-jawed, look at one another and then back to Geralt. He could respond 'Well?" and they just say nothing...
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Oh man! If she could have been watching from a distance...Geralt wouldn't even know she was there until MUCH later she could reference one of the lines you chose in the play! Get a good laugh and an endearing moment...buuuuut nooooooo!....must resist.....must not be drawn into argument......must step away from the laptop.....
A bit of drama there, i showed the scene of Geralt doing Priscilla's play to a friend of a friend who is studying drama (trying to be a drama teacher), and he couldn't stop laughing and all i was thinking is how awkward it would be if Triss was watching it, even i barely got through it....
Geralt: Once i saw Triss in Novigrad, all the feelings i had for her returned
Vesemir: This is what you want?
Geralt: Yes never doubted it for a second:
Vesemir: Well let's make sure we protect Ciri from the Wild Hunt, then we can discuss it more in detail
Geralt: I know, i am just happy to see her again....and you of course
Vesemir: I expected no less.... and there are no hard feelings for that other special lady?
Geralt: I will always care for her, but my heart is with Triss
Vesemir: Well, just remember no Witcher has died in a bed before
Geralt: I intend to be the first
I am sure someone will write something better
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Haha it was one hell of a great opportunity, to have Triss mention it later on would of been epic, also i could imagine Geralt trying to explain to Triss why he was in that play, because i don't think Triss would of expected something like that ever!
Lol any topping no restrictions.
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Any talented takers? I know you are in here but don't remember you name. Please don't make me scroll through 500+ pages to find you.
Pretty please
That was hilarious!The Escapist is kind of terrible for this but I'm so glad they did this.
It would have been a GREAT place for a 'flashback' moment for her as she was telling the story...maybe to Ciri. Geralt would be like, "whaaa...why didn't you tell me you were there?"
My current plan on my next play through will be to use the Wolf set. After the game was over, I crafted it all the way up and yeah it looked pretty good. The only thing I don't like is the red in the set, or on the sword scabbards. I prefer the black/brown, with some silver look. I wish they would have made the staring armor fully upgradable without changing the look. Especially when during Ciri's flashbacks at the end we were wearing the starting armor.
So I noticed others were coming up with conversations so I decided to give it a try:
This is additional dialogue I came up with between Keira and Geralt for when you talk with her at Kaer Morhen if you romanced Triss. Feel free to change whatever.
G: So what do you think our chances are?
K: I don't know. To be honest Geralt if I knew by coming here that I would end up fighting the Wild Hunt I would have never came.
G: What is keeping you here then?
K: Hearing talk of everyone here about Ciri it seems that protecting her is more than just for personal interests. I couldn't imagine what the Wild Hunt wants with her but it doesn't sound good. Besides, if anything, I find it very entertaining listening to Lambert and Yen bickering like children. I have never met someone who is able to annoy Yen so much as Lambert does.
G: Well well it seems Keira Meitz has a little crush on our witcher.
K: Well you do know that I fancy dark haired men...but that is a personal matter of mine. And speaking of personal matters it seems Yen is a bit more pricklier than I last remember. Did something happen? Also on my way in I noticed a broken bed outside of this place and apparently from what I heard it was Yen's doing.
G: She said it reminded her of Triss.
K: Why should that be a problem? I thought the two of you are together.
G: Thought wrong...we ended things between us recently.
K: Oh that explains a lot...I assume Triss was happy to hear about that. In fact she does seem a bit cheerful considering the circumstances. Are you two back...
G: That's none of your business. Let's just focus on stopping the hunt.
K: Well well Geralt, I thought Yen had a tighter leash on you. I take back what I said about you being a dog. It appears you do have some control over yourself after all. Anyways like you said none of my business. Back to the matters at hand.
Wasn't sure how to end this without having Keira make some witty statement on Geralt's relationship with Yen so I thought her referencing her statement about Geralt being a dog towards Yen and taking it back would be a nice conclusion to the dialogue though I imagine others can come up with better so I would be interested in reading those as well.
This is additional dialogue I came up with between Keira and Geralt for when you talk with her at Kaer Morhen if you romanced Triss. Feel free to change whatever.
G: So what do you think our chances are?
K: I don't know. To be honest Geralt if I knew by coming here that I would end up fighting the Wild Hunt I would have never came.
G: What is keeping you here then?
K: Hearing talk of everyone here about Ciri it seems that protecting her is more than just for personal interests. I couldn't imagine what the Wild Hunt wants with her but it doesn't sound good. Besides, if anything, I find it very entertaining listening to Lambert and Yen bickering like children. I have never met someone who is able to annoy Yen so much as Lambert does.
G: Well well it seems Keira Meitz has a little crush on our witcher.
K: Well you do know that I fancy dark haired men...but that is a personal matter of mine. And speaking of personal matters it seems Yen is a bit more pricklier than I last remember. Did something happen? Also on my way in I noticed a broken bed outside of this place and apparently from what I heard it was Yen's doing.
G: She said it reminded her of Triss.
K: Why should that be a problem? I thought the two of you are together.
G: Thought wrong...we ended things between us recently.
K: Oh that explains a lot...I assume Triss was happy to hear about that. In fact she does seem a bit cheerful considering the circumstances. Are you two back...
G: That's none of your business. Let's just focus on stopping the hunt.
K: Well well Geralt, I thought Yen had a tighter leash on you. I take back what I said about you being a dog. It appears you do have some control over yourself after all. Anyways like you said none of my business. Back to the matters at hand.
Wasn't sure how to end this without having Keira make some witty statement on Geralt's relationship with Yen so I thought her referencing her statement about Geralt being a dog towards Yen and taking it back would be a nice conclusion to the dialogue though I imagine others can come up with better so I would be interested in reading those as well.
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Okay, I just re-watched the scene on YouTube to get a jumping off point. In the one I found, Triss definitely said "Thank Yennefer. She's the one who invited me." I don't think she says it when you romance her but the codex still says it. Inconsistencies on top of inconsistencies! I hate it. :X Anyways, here:
Geralt's Arrival at Kaer Morhen:
*Yen kisses Geralt and Triss shoots them a look (just like normal)*
G “Nice to see you guys again.”
Y “Not really the right time for a reunion, Geralt. The Hunt is surely on its way. Especially after that entrance. There’ll be time for pleasantries later. Come. We must confer inside.”
G “Sure. I’ll be right there.”
*Yen and Ciri depart from the group and head towards the keep chatting along the way*
(The group now consists of Vesemir, Geralt, and Triss)
T “Geralt? What was up with that kiss?”
G “Mmmm, I dunno. I guess she’s just glad that I brought Ciri back safe and sound. I wouldn’t think too much of it.”
T “You’re probably right. I’ll let it slide this time. Yennefer had better remember to keep her hands to herself from now on.”
G “I’ll remember if she can’t.”
*They all stand around looking a little awkward for a second*
T “Vesemir, it’s good to see you.”
V “I'm glad you’re here. How long has it been, 2 years?”
T “Yeah, give or take. Seems like the Salamandra attack was so long ago now. Maybe because so much has happened since then.”
V “That was a hard battle. Frankly, I’m surprised we pulled it off. The keep has definitely seen better days.”
T “With you as its caretaker, I’m not surprised.”
V “Maybe if I could get a little help around here. These damn kids never want to put in an honest day’s work. Hopefully it doesn’t come back to hurt us now.”
G “We can discuss logistics inside. Just wanted to say, Triss, I’m especially glad you’re here. Really looking forward to putting the Hunt down for good.”
T “You know there’s nowhere else I’d rather be. Here at your side, helping you with Ciri.”
G “The Hunt is going to make Salamandra look like a walk in the park. You think you’re ready?”
T “Yeah, I think so. I’ve been working on my artillery. What about you? Leshens and Bruxae don’t really compare to Eredin or Imlerith.”
G “They aren’t ready for me. Slaughtering helpless villagers is bad practice against Witchers. Besides, I’ve got something to fight for. You and Ciri."
*Triss smiles, walks over to him and kisses him on the cheek*
T “I’ll see you inside.”
(Now it is just Geralt and Vesemir and they talk while walking toward the keep)
V “You sure about Triss?”
G “Yeah. Never been more sure of anything in my life.”
V “I thought this whole journey was about finding Yennefer. What on earth happened out there?”
G “I just couldn’t go through with it. Triss worked her way in during our time together. I thought when I found Yen it would be like old times again. Problem was, I just couldn’t seem to get Triss out of my head. And she dragooned me into breaking that wish between us.”
V “Hmm. As long as you’re sure. Would hate for you to wind up like that bed. Hell hath no fury like a sorceress scorned.”
G *chuckles* “Don’t worry about me. Come on, time to focus. Let’s worry about Ciri for now.”
V “Right behind you, Wolf.”
*Geralt and Vesemir walk up the path where Triss is waiting outside the doors. Vesemir looks at Geralt, shakes his head, and walks inside*
G “Triss, what’re you doing out here?”
T “Just wanted a second alone. Truth be told, I am a little nervous."
G “C’mhere.”
*They hug for a few seconds*
G “Too late to change our minds now. We’ll have to make due with what we’ve got.”
T “Alright. You better not get killed out there, Witcher.”
G “Not a chance.”
*They walk through the doors together and get straight to work*
(The game then continues like normal)
I'll rewrite the whole thing.
Geralt's Arrival at Kaer Morhen:
- I am leaving the kiss in by the way
*Yen kisses Geralt and Triss shoots them a look (just like normal)*
G “Nice to see you guys again.”
Y “Not really the right time for a reunion, Geralt. The Hunt is surely on its way. Especially after that entrance. There’ll be time for pleasantries later. Come. We must confer inside.”
G “Sure. I’ll be right there.”
*Yen and Ciri depart from the group and head towards the keep chatting along the way*
(The group now consists of Vesemir, Geralt, and Triss)
T “Geralt? What was up with that kiss?”
G “Mmmm, I dunno. I guess she’s just glad that I brought Ciri back safe and sound. I wouldn’t think too much of it.”
T “You’re probably right. I’ll let it slide this time. Yennefer had better remember to keep her hands to herself from now on.”
G “I’ll remember if she can’t.”
*They all stand around looking a little awkward for a second*
T “Vesemir, it’s good to see you.”
V “I'm glad you’re here. How long has it been, 2 years?”
T “Yeah, give or take. Seems like the Salamandra attack was so long ago now. Maybe because so much has happened since then.”
V “That was a hard battle. Frankly, I’m surprised we pulled it off. The keep has definitely seen better days.”
T “With you as its caretaker, I’m not surprised.”
V “Maybe if I could get a little help around here. These damn kids never want to put in an honest day’s work. Hopefully it doesn’t come back to hurt us now.”
G “We can discuss logistics inside. Just wanted to say, Triss, I’m especially glad you’re here. Really looking forward to putting the Hunt down for good.”
T “You know there’s nowhere else I’d rather be. Here at your side, helping you with Ciri.”
G “The Hunt is going to make Salamandra look like a walk in the park. You think you’re ready?”
T “Yeah, I think so. I’ve been working on my artillery. What about you? Leshens and Bruxae don’t really compare to Eredin or Imlerith.”
G “They aren’t ready for me. Slaughtering helpless villagers is bad practice against Witchers. Besides, I’ve got something to fight for. You and Ciri."
*Triss smiles, walks over to him and kisses him on the cheek*
T “I’ll see you inside.”
(Now it is just Geralt and Vesemir and they talk while walking toward the keep)
V “You sure about Triss?”
G “Yeah. Never been more sure of anything in my life.”
V “I thought this whole journey was about finding Yennefer. What on earth happened out there?”
G “I just couldn’t go through with it. Triss worked her way in during our time together. I thought when I found Yen it would be like old times again. Problem was, I just couldn’t seem to get Triss out of my head. And she dragooned me into breaking that wish between us.”
V “Hmm. As long as you’re sure. Would hate for you to wind up like that bed. Hell hath no fury like a sorceress scorned.”
G *chuckles* “Don’t worry about me. Come on, time to focus. Let’s worry about Ciri for now.”
V “Right behind you, Wolf.”
*Geralt and Vesemir walk up the path where Triss is waiting outside the doors. Vesemir looks at Geralt, shakes his head, and walks inside*
G “Triss, what’re you doing out here?”
T “Just wanted a second alone. Truth be told, I am a little nervous."
G “C’mhere.”
*They hug for a few seconds*
G “Too late to change our minds now. We’ll have to make due with what we’ve got.”
T “Alright. You better not get killed out there, Witcher.”
G “Not a chance.”
*They walk through the doors together and get straight to work*
(The game then continues like normal)
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That sounded awesome, i like how people are using other characters other than say Triss or Yen to talk about Geralt's relationship with Triss (or Yen), like how you used Keira in this scenario. I want someone to try a conversation with Letho, imagine Geralt trying to explain and Letho not caring only talking about how Triss conjures butterflies
It would be too much carnal and romantic if i add my things
Can always rely on you to deliver great dialogueOkay, I just re-watched the scene on YouTube to get a jumping off point. In the one I found, Triss definitely said "Thank Yennefer. She's the one who invited me." I don't think she says it when you romance her but the codex still says it. Inconsistencies on top of inconsistencies! I hate it. :X Anyways, here:
I'll rewrite the whole thing.
Geralt's Arrival at Kaer Morhen:
- I am leaving the kiss in by the way
*Yen kisses Geralt and Triss shoots them a look (just like normal)*
G “Nice to see you guys again.”
Y “Not really the right time for a reunion, Geralt. The Hunt is surely on its way. Especially after that entrance. There’ll be time for pleasantries later. Come. We must confer inside.”
G “Sure. I’ll be right there.”
*Yen and Ciri depart from the group and head towards the keep chatting along the way*
(The group now consists of Vesemir, Geralt, and Triss)
T “Geralt? What was up with that kiss?”
G “Mmmm, I dunno. I guess she’s just glad that I brought Ciri back safe and sound. I wouldn’t think too much of it.”
T “You’re probably right. I’ll let it slide this time. Yennefer had better remember to keep her hands to herself from now on.”
G “I’ll remember if she can’t.”
*They all stand around looking a little awkward for a second*
T “Vesemir, it’s good to see you.”
V “I'm glad you’re here. How long has it been, 2 years?”
T “Yeah, give or take. Seems like the Salamandra attack was so long ago now. Maybe because so much has happened since then.”
V “That was a hard battle. Frankly, I’m surprised we pulled it off. The keep has definitely seen better days.”
T “With you as its caretaker, I’m not surprised.”
V “Maybe if I could get a little help around here. These damn kids never want to put in an honest day’s work. Hopefully it doesn’t come back to hurt us now.”
G “We can discuss logistics inside. Just wanted to say, Triss, I’m especially glad you’re here. Really looking forward to putting the Hunt down for good.”
T “You know there’s nowhere else I’d rather be. Here at your side, helping you with Ciri.”
G “The Hunt is going to make Salamandra look like a walk in the park. You think you’re ready?”
T “Yeah, I think so. I’ve been working on my artillery. What about you? Leshens and Bruxae don’t really compare to Eredin or Imlerith.”
G “They aren’t ready for me. Slaughtering helpless villagers is bad practice against Witchers. Besides, I’ve got something to fight for. You and Ciri."
*Triss smiles, walks over to him and kisses him on the cheek*
T “I’ll see you inside.”
(Now it is just Geralt and Vesemir and they talk while walking toward the keep)
V “You sure about Triss?”
G “Yeah. Never been more sure of anything in my life.”
V “I thought this whole journey was about finding Yennefer. What on earth happened out there?”
G “I just couldn’t go through with it. Triss worked her way in during our time together. I thought when I found Yen it would be like old times again. Problem was, I just couldn’t seem to get Triss out of my head. And she dragooned me into breaking that wish between us.”
V “Hmm. As long as you’re sure. Would hate for you to wind up like that bed. Hell hath no fury like a sorceress scorned.”
G *chuckles* “Don’t worry about me. Come on, time to focus. Let’s worry about Ciri for now.”
V “Right behind you, Wolf.”
*Geralt and Vesemir walk up the path where Triss is waiting outside the doors. Vesemir looks at Geralt, shakes his head, and walks inside*
G “Triss, what’re you doing out here?”
T “Just wanted a second alone. Truth be told, I am a little nervous."
G “C’mhere.”
*They hug for a few seconds*
G “Too late to change our minds now. We’ll have to make due with what we’ve got.”
T “Alright. You better not get killed out there, Witcher.”
G “Not a chance.”
*They walk through the doors together and get straight to work*
(The game then continues like normal)
Thanks.
If anyone wants me to try a scenario they've thought of, just pitch me an idea. I really like how you ended yours with the "No Witcher's ever died in his bed" thing. I couldn't really find a way to work it into mine though. :X---------- Updated at 03:43 AM ----------
I really, really like the hair. The dress is just impractical as all get out though. And it doesn't match the hood she wears out in the streets. :X I prefer the straight-up adorableness of her original look. It's just too "sexed-up". Yen's too - I don't like those stockings she wears. I wonder how Ciri's will look.
If you want, try doing some dialogue between Triss, Geralt, Yen, Ciri, and Phillippa (or any combination of the five) while on the boat or Geralt and Triss in the tent before the final battle. Be interested in reading how you think that will go.Thanks.
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I really, really like the hair. The dress is just impractical as all get out though. And it doesn't match the hood she wears out in the streets. :X I prefer the straight-up adorableness of her original look. It's just too "sexed-up". Yen's too - I don't like those stockings she wears. I wonder how Ciri's will look.
On the outfit I agree that the default one is more practical and more "Triss". I tried using it in Now or Never but for some reason they had Triss keep that circlet necklace and giant blue braid in her hair in the sex scene. Just didn't look right...
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This is so awesome, I think we are on to something here folks.
And i ain't sure you guys want one hour of dramaturgy and six pages on it,with some dande in the back from nowhere and etc etc etc
I actually wrote this one a while back. Like 400 pages or so.
I've even tweaked it slightly since then. I think I captured a moment that is really true to their characters here.Prior to the Final Battle:
*Triss is standing on the cliff's edge looking at into the bay. The water is still like glass.*
G "Hey. Something wrong? You left the tent awfully fast back there."
T *She turns to face him, visibly distressed* "This is it Geralt. The Hunt is coming here. We may have beaten them at Kaer Morhen but that was a damned fortress and there were more of us then. Even then it was close."
G "Hey. We beat them once. We can do it again. We just have to work together."
T "But you don't know that. The Sunstone will summon the Naglefar. Who knows what else could come through with it? Eredin is probably pretty pissed you took out his general too."
G "Yeah but - "
T "I mean, what if this is it? Everything we've been through comes down to this. What if we don't make it out of here?"
G "We have to try. We can't keep running from them forever. We have to put an end to them once and for all. They've been haunting all of us for a long time now. At least we have the element of surprise on our side."
T "The Hunt is never not ready for a fight, you know that."
G "True. Same for me though."
T "This isn't just another Witcher's contract. He's the most powerful foe any of us have ever faced." *She starts to tear up*
*Geralt hugs her and after a second she hugs him back*
G "We won't lose. I promise. The son of a bitch killed Vesemir - I've been itching to even the score."
*They let the hug go*
T "Hmm, I don't know why, but I think I believe you. Like you’re so sure you’re right or something."
G "Because I am right. Alright. Time to focus. Avalac'h is preparing the Sunstone. Don't worry about me. I can handle myself. I didn't go through hell and back just to lose now."
T "Sure."
*Geralt starts to walk away*
T "Hey, Geralt?”*He turns around*
T “I love you too. I never said it before, back on the dock... Just wanted to remind you that you’ve got something else, someone else to fight for. Now go kick some ass."
*Geralt smiles, nods, and walks away*
Didn't get the "Thank Yen" in mind I would have notice and become enraged. Lol
Oh yeah this is good. Talented Triss fans please jump in here.I'll rewrite the whole thing.
Geralt's Arrival at Kaer Morhen:
- I am leaving the kiss in by the way
*Yen kisses Geralt and Triss shoots them a look (just like normal)*
G “Nice to see you guys again.”
Y “Not really the right time for a reunion, Geralt. The Hunt is surely on its way. Especially after that entrance. There’ll be time for pleasantries later. Come. We must confer inside.”
G “Sure. I’ll be right there.”
*Yen and Ciri depart from the group and head towards the keep chatting along the way*
(The group now consists of Vesemir, Geralt, and Triss)
T “Geralt? What was up with that kiss?”
G “Mmmm, I dunno. I guess she’s just glad that I brought Ciri back safe and sound. I wouldn’t think too much of it.”
T “You’re probably right. I’ll let it slide this time. Yennefer had better remember to keep her hands to herself from now on.”
G “I’ll remember if she can’t.”
*They all stand around looking a little awkward for a second*
T “Vesemir, it’s good to see you.”
V “I'm glad you’re here. How long has it been, 2 years?”
T “Yeah, give or take. Seems like the Salamandra attack was so long ago now. Maybe because so much has happened since then.”
V “That was a hard battle. Frankly, I’m surprised we pulled it off. The keep has definitely seen better days.”
T “With you as its caretaker, I’m not surprised.”
V “Maybe if I could get a little help around here. These damn kids never want to put in an honest day’s work. Hopefully it doesn’t come back to hurt us now.”
G “We can discuss logistics inside. Just wanted to say, Triss, I’m especially glad you’re here. Really looking forward to putting the Hunt down for good.”
T “You know there’s nowhere else I’d rather be. Here at your side, helping you with Ciri.”
G “The Hunt is going to make Salamandra look like a walk in the park. You think you’re ready?”
T “Yeah, I think so. I’ve been working on my artillery. What about you? Leshens and Bruxae don’t really compare to Eredin or Imlerith.”
G “They aren’t ready for me. Slaughtering helpless villagers is bad practice against Witchers. Besides, I’ve got something to fight for. You and Ciri."
*Triss smiles, walks over to him and kisses him on the cheek*
T “I’ll see you inside.”
(Now it is just Geralt and Vesemir and they talk while walking toward the keep)
V “You sure about Triss?”
G “Yeah. Never been more sure of anything in my life.”
V “I thought this whole journey was about finding Yennefer. What on earth happened out there?”
G “I just couldn’t go through with it. Triss worked her way in during our time together. I thought when I found Yen it would be like old times again. Problem was, I just couldn’t seem to get Triss out of my head. And she dragooned me into breaking that wish between us.”
V “Hmm. As long as you’re sure. Would hate for you to wind up like that bed. Hell hath no fury like a sorceress scorned.”
G *chuckles* “Don’t worry about me. Come on, time to focus. Let’s worry about Ciri for now.”
V “Right behind you, Wolf.”
*Geralt and Vesemir walk up the path where Triss is waiting outside the doors. Vesemir looks at Geralt, shakes his head, and walks inside*
G “Triss, what’re you doing out here?”
T “Just wanted a second alone. Truth be told, I am a little nervous."
G “C’mhere.”
*They hug for a few seconds*
G “Too late to change our minds now. We’ll have to make due with what we’ve got.”
T “Alright. You better not get killed out there, Witcher.”
G “Not a chance.”
*They walk through the doors together and get straight to work*
(The game then continues like normal)
More please, More Triss, More Triss, More Triss, More Triss Geralt Merigold
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What? Come on let's see what you got.
I actually need to write it with papers, but i have no more papers so....
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Didn't write any story on the subject, and i like the long stories, so when i will get the paper if you all want to see some dramaturgy over here, then i will take my time and
write it
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Didn't write any story on the subject, and i like the long stories, so when i will get the paper if you all want to see some dramaturgy over here, then i will take my time and
write it
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