WardDragon said:
I think you did a good job with Zoltan's and Dandelion's personalities. I could hear their voice actors in my head as I read the dialogue
I'm very glad to hear that! That's how I write dialogue for the known characters, actually -- I imagine hearing their voice actor speak it. There have been times when writing dialogue (in "Medical Problems," not here) where I couldn't imagine a particular voice saying whatever it was, so I changed the line until I could get the voice to come back. And sometimes the changes would be fairly small, but I couldn't get Shani's voice to appear in my head until I said THIS instead of THAT.
I hope that doesn't make me sound certifiable.
WardDragon said:
I notice that you reused Zoltan's house from Medical Problems 2, which was a nice touch because it made this little adventure feel connected to your previous adventures.
*smile* I'm glad you noticed that! We don't have any idea how Zoltan lives, so I couldn't make his house match up to what was in the main game (and if his house is in the books at all, it's in a part that hasn't been translated yet), but at least I can be consistent within my own stuff.
WardDragon said:
And on Dandelion's path that poem that Geralt came up with was hilarious
*smile* Yes, it was great fun to make up a truly bad poem. I shared it with my husband, who said, "But, but ... that's TERRIBLE! You can't use that." "No, no, you don't understand -- it's SUPPOSED TO be bad."
WardDragon said:
I was also glad that you put the option to give Dandelion a present too because I felt bad thinking that he wanted the fancy presents so much but couldn't afford them himself.
Both Zoltan and Dandelion get something out of helping Geralt with his dilemma -- Zoltan gets his "beasties" killed, and Dandelion gets an expensive ingredient.
WardDragon said:
As for the final cutscene, I over-think things too much and I thought it was a little strange for Yennefer to be completely naked while Geralt is fully clothed
Yes, it DOES seem strange. If we had a nude model for Geralt in TW1, I would certainly use it, but unfortunately, there isn't one. There isn't even a model where he isn't wearing GLOVES. Sheesh. At least I can get his vest off of him; that's the best I can do.
WardDragon said:
As for the animation itself, I wonder if it was meant to be with Triss originally. I remember Shani had a custom animation but I don't think Triss did, although my Triss play-through was years ago so it's possible I just forgot.
Yes, it is an animation for Triss, so much so that the Triss model has that animation but none of the other female models do. I might have recolored Blue Eyes to be Yennefer, so she wouldn't look so much like Triss, but Triss was the only one I could make the cutscene with.
Triss does have a special animation that you get at the beginning of Chapter 3 -- the one where she puts both hands on Geralt's chest and pushes him backwards onto the bed -- but that's not as sexy as the one they chose not to use.
WardDragon said:
LOL, I forgot about that poem!
Perhaps you suppressed the memory, because hearing such bad poetry is so traumatic.
WardDragon said:
I wish I could hear Geralt (english) voice act it...I imagine it would sound so wrong.
Really? I can imagine Doug Cockle saying it just fine, myself, with a dry, humorous intonation intended to convey that he COULD do better than this but doesn't intend to waste his time on poetry.
*sigh* Every time I play one of my adventures, I wish I could hear the voice actors doing the lines for real, instead of just in my head. I know exactly how every line is supposed to sound, so I could direct them just fine. I'm sure they're glad they don't have to put up with that.
WardDragon said:
I guess sorceresses care little for poetry, since Geralt keeps getting them without any talent what so ever.
I imagine sorceresses get plenty of poetry declaimed to them by the people in their usual circles ... and Geralt is a welcome change from their usual world.