Apart from being too short, the intro needs a voice. Either Geralt's, Vesemir's or Dandelion's, narrating the story so far, or at least what's happening there. Since the devs said that it could be played as a stand alone game by players new to the Witcher universe, I'm inclined to believe that this is not the whole thing, it feels a bit out of place for someone who hasn't seen the story so far.
I think the part in bold is the most pertinent point to be made about this whole thing. We must recognise that not everybody who plays the game will have prior knowledge from the books, games, or
even the various videos leading up to release. Over the lifetime of the game it must be expected, and therefore planned for, that "total newbie Witchers" will install and play this game, so we should think about how the intro as it has been shown so far will work for them. Its my considered opinion that It won't.
Witcher 1
did have narration for its intro, an opener & a closer voiced by Vesemir, the opening narration provided essential
context to the events of the video, the closer in fact is more suitable to
this game than it was to that game, it even hints as much itself. So a narration-free intro like TW2 is not a standard that must be followed, and even if it was I believe the central point still stands, The Trail desperately needs
context to stand on its own.
I've tried to view the Killing Monsters & The Trail together imagining them slightly differently from they are at the minute as one piece instead. In KM we have Vesemir talking to Geralt, we have Geralt
narrating to us, in TT we have no voice at all, just sounds of battle. We also know from info not in TT but provided to websites that Geralt is essentially travelling to a meeting arranged by letter. This piece of info surely must be part of the games info and not present in what we have seen for an unknown reason. The only reason that makes any real sense is that TT is
not the full opening sequence.
If the theory that KM & TT together equals the opener is true - and it would certainly make sense particularly for the new Witchers referred to earlier - then the Year & Place on a black screen inserted into "Cleganes scene" is as inappropriate as it looks, since KM simply shows "No Mans Land" in writing bottom left at the beginning. Yet as I watch these two videos I feel even spliced together they're not enough. Heres what I think the opener
has always been planned to be:
Begins with KM, pretty much as we see it, conversation between the 2 Witchers & some of Geralts interior voice that we love so much, followed by more of Geralt & Vesemir travelling & talking about The Letter & Geralts memory quest and why they are there, maybe even Vesemir reprising something of his TW1 closing narration portending the larger part of the game "The Time of Disdain", leading to The Trail which will have an entirely different soundtrack to what we have seen, either Geralt or Vesemir, or even Yen takes over talking here (perhaps the text of the letter describing her own state of mind?).
Would that work? Geralt narrating some, then Vesemir, then Yen? I can't think of such being done before, it would mirror (and we are seeing quite a lot of mirroring) the number 3 which is increasingly significant in this game. Vesemir taking the chance to note how the surrounding events resemble
Ithlinnes Prophecy might allow for a brief glimpse of the Hunt or Ciri (although personally I don't think this is necessary - I believe its quite obvious now we begin on the trail of Yen in NML, then the next stage of the game will be looking for Ciri in Skellige, after meeting with Emhyr, and I suspect introducing one new beloved of Geralt at a time is enough).
edit: and I submit for evidence to support this theory the fact that Vesemir appears to be the next reveal, perhaps the middle part of the intro is coming next.
Plus I can't make it out who drops the bag in TT. Can anyone?
BTW: that Ambition video is simply superb !